As suggested at http://dailypost.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/challenge-haiku/#more-48826
My native country on this terraformed planet is tropical; all its flora and fauna are imported from someplace on Earth. There is no moon here so the night sky features endless stars. There are no fossil fuels so we mostly travel by horse. I have a favourite patch of land up a dry streambed where I go to camp out some nights. In the opposite direction, there are dunes and some magnificent beaches.
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I lie out naked
Night sand, beach towel, alone –
Warm stars tingle me
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My horse blows out sound
as I brush him. Barn echoes
the sound of his breath
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Lizards watch me move,
Tyranno-human bends down
Far above their heads
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Brightness, hummingbird!
A hallucinated flash
Travels past my mind
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Streambeds cut the ground
Our lives bend, converge, and fall:
We are water maps
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These are great! Thanks for visiting and following my blog. Much appreciated! Best wishes, Zainab
All the best to you, too Zainab, and thanks! I look forward to reading your blog in the upcoming times.
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